What do you think about this? This is my first article so be nice :-) --Frejh 11:57, 23 May 2006 (EDT)

Very nice nicely written. A few minor spelling/grammer errors but overall is very well written and laid out. In the future you might want to keep an eye out for run on sentances and tense agreement (keeping your past, present, and future tense in agreement). --Toloran 23:13, 23 May 2006 (EDT)