Article re-write? Edit

I was reading through this article, and I think it could be written better. The name of Sergeant is repeated quite a bit, plus, it seems more like an article you'd find on a fansite then an encyclopedia. I can re-write it, I just don't want to go ahead and change the article unless others agree with me. Ellethwen 20:06, 13 January 2007 (EST)

I'm all for giving Sergeant the honor he deserves as being a bonafide WoWWiki character entry.--Zexx 20:47, 13 January 2007 (EST)